Monday, February 18, 2013

i'm in pieces--bits and pieces...d. clark

losing the real man
is never as upsetting
as losing the dream

So much pain in the world
But I feel no passion
Save for the personal
Which is out of fashion

alone together
is what many of us choose
from desperation

1 comment:

  1. these are well done. interesting structure too. quatrain on senryu sandwich.

    a few thoughts:

    desperation is itself a choice. we can choose to get over it.

    if personal passion is truly out of fashion, there must be a good reason.

    if u really lost the dream, u wouldn't be upset.